Skip directly to content

What do you think of my raps?

  • RayK_2's picture
    says: (17 Sep '10)

    aight i aint tryin to use no exuses  but...

    Rap #1:

    freestyled

    done at age 12

    just for fun

    Unfinished


    Rap #2:

    written in about 25 minutes

    dine at age 11

    for school

     

    I'd like u to tell me what to work on and what u like, and give me your oppinions

     

    any fan mail, business proposals, or questions, could be sent to: raykraps@yahoo.com

    i'll reply to all that i can. also if you have any connections with rappers, let me know.


    Rap #1

    Not The One to Blame

    see,it aint my fault these critics keep writin me these sick reviews

    and your little kids

    talk to my pics

    sayin "i wanna be just like you!"

    and

    0
RayK_2's picture
on September 17, 2010

aight i aint tryin to use no exuses  but...

Rap #1:

freestyled

done at age 12

just for fun

Unfinished


Rap #2:

written in about 25 minutes

dine at age 11

for school

 

I'd like u to tell me what to work on and what u like, and give me your oppinions

 

any fan mail, business proposals, or questions, could be sent to: raykraps@yahoo.com

i'll reply to all that i can. also if you have any connections with rappers, let me know.


Rap #1

Not The One to Blame

see,it aint my fault these critics keep writin me these sick reviews

and your little kids

talk to my pics

sayin "i wanna be just like you!"

and no, i haven't been sent up as one of the devils spirits

tryin to get your kids to look so deep into my lyrics

and get em to do everything that i tell

i dont even do it

if i did half those things, id have an early dismisil from life, and be sent straight down to hell

and i dnt care if the the parents think im a bad influene or not

i aint takin no bodies word for it

never gunna stop

im only here to open up like shady or pac

i dnt care bout the kids, they could do what ever they want

but don't hold me responsible, u raised em ur selves

balme me, and ill send ur ass with em to hell

im crazy as shit

just understand that i am a complete uncontrollable crazy ass bitch

so don't get me pissed

or i'll go on mtv and comand ur boys and girls to go and slit their wrists

and if i tell 'em to do something they will do it so quick

that u just mite as well cause abortion cause ur damn sure to lose or to quit

So now u best not be comin up blamin  Ray K for your your problems

I dint come in the game

aimin to be nobodies fukin role models

and im not the mutha fuka to blame

it was just something that my ass had stumbled upon

maybe it was some kinda fate

so ill forgive and forget, if you get ur act strait

but be redy to get ur ass kicked if your still understandin me wrong

and i hope ur little fukin kids see when u shoot my ass up for this song

 

Rap #2

Just Say No


When it comes to drugs, I wouldn't want to be wheeling a chair
Scratching my head, I swear there used to be hair
I got too much pride to be seeing impaired
Never risking my life over the needles they share
Because when you're caught up in the mix, people will stare
I don't wanna be the guy with no life, drug dealing for fares
Life loses control, and love becomes covered with fumes
Imagine life as an addict, with nothing to lose
Let this be a lesson to learn
A lesson deserved
Lessen the urge when your smelling something burn
Do the right thing, walk away and never return
Because nothing feels better when you express it with words like-
People smoke, people choke
Lose a life, lose a home
Lose your lungs, lose your tongue
Or have a hole up in your throat
Like a game, you never know
The type of hand you're gonna roll
But i know, when I see drugs
All I have to do is "Just Say No"

Forum category: