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Can you come up with complicated rhymes like lupe?

  • lupeforlife's picture
    says: (01 Jun '10)

    Post the rhymes that you have to think about to get. And give an explanation.

    Like he said "Proof like a vestless chest", Proof eminem's friend was shot in the chest if can remember correclty.

     

    Here is mine "I have so many questions, you can call me spanish". In spanish, when you ask a question, you have to put a question mark in the beggining of the sentence and at the end.

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lupeforlife's picture
on June 01, 2010

Post the rhymes that you have to think about to get. And give an explanation.

Like he said "Proof like a vestless chest", Proof eminem's friend was shot in the chest if can remember correclty.

 

Here is mine "I have so many questions, you can call me spanish". In spanish, when you ask a question, you have to put a question mark in the beggining of the sentence and at the end.

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KaliKid10's picture

I have many complicated rhymes, but I have a song with nice lyrics, called "Creep", if you go listen I think you'll hear some of the best lines ever. Here's the link: http://www.myspace.com/hiphopca93
Aradi's picture

"Cuz I’m not Alf, so to you, my name is Sunshine Like I’m high and I’m bright, with my wack mind. And I’m hot, on my spot, with half a mind. To heat this scene, like I planned it, like I’m the mastermind..." Brown nose/Alf is a wordplay used by Lupe in Failure, and Sunshine is a Lupe track. The sun is high and bright, and myself I'm talented like I'm on dope (high), or I'm very smart (bright), and that appears to be so because I've got a wack mind (carrying on the cain/Cane pun). Like the sun, I'm hot. And I feel like heating your zone up with my flow, like I've got the brightest mind (mastermind). A mastermind is the guy who plans stuff and all, so I put it in there to make up the words. I really like yours, NextSundance, I can spot some wordplays. I'll come back to it later.
Aradi's picture

"My Verbal’s able, and yours is Cane, like I flog that. Trying to take mine, but I tell you homie, that’s whack." My Verbal's Able is a pun coined by Lupe in Failure based on The Goodfellas. Here I use it to say my flow is able, and I also used a Cain and Abel Qur'anic and Biblical reference. Cain wanted to marry the wife that was given to Abel and killed his brother over that. There is also another meaning of a cane, used for flogging. I also used flogging as a pun to mean beating y'all and also giving you something. I beat others with my flow and yet my flow is like a gift to them. So now others want my talent like Cain wanted Abel's wife, but to me it's whack (crazy), which is also an onomatopoeia of the sound that a cane makes. "I’m like flogging it, so I give it to you in a gift wrap. I whipping y’all, pull your pants up, cuz I can repeat that." I'm sharing my talent with y'all for free, so I give it to you as a gift in this (w)rap. And at the same time I'm shaming y'all, so better give up or I'll come back harder. "And my cane’s sweet, admit it, it’s like sucrose. Like the brown, not the white, and I know that blows." I continue with the Cain and Abel theme in the second stanza. My talent, which exposes yours so bare, is so sweet to you even if you don't admit it, it's like sugar cane. Sugar cane is very sweet and is used to make sugar. The raw form of the sugar is brown, before it's treated to be white. So I'm saying that my flow is in it's raw, explicit, brown form. I'm saying I know it sucks for you. "But I’m able and I’m new like I’m the new dose Of fresh air, and vitamin D, so I don’t brown nose." Continuing with the Abel pun. Now I'm saying I'm a fresh breath, and also bright like sunshine, so I don't need to kiss up to others. cont'd..
NextSundance's picture

Exegesis can come later. You think you got me but I really got you You can only see one but I can spot two Two sides to my rhymes, they are not cubes Light and dark, black and white, I am one dude You don't wanna fight me utilizing rhetoric A simile would be like fighting me with a stick But my raps are razor blades, sharp like Schick The lines are spit are so ill, I must be sick Because my hype is spreading like an infection Obama in Iowa, just wait for the election Change the game needs, I'll point it in the right direction No way I'll be wrong, no way I'll need correction Like Winehouse I won't need to go to rehab No no no chance that you can make me mad Cause I smile in your face, go killin' spree Glad Takin' out the trash I'll need some body bags This rap is not magic, my rhymes are not illusions More like metaphor mixed in with some allusions Beat and flow go together you'd think it was collusion. Beat down on your head, give you a brain contusion. It's the R-O-C, but not workin' with Def Jam, Not used to writin' rhymes like using my left hand. Rather freestyle because I prefer the free form, Not just the brain this is an all of me storm. Westward Expansion, I'm always ready to lay down a track, You can hear us coming it'll cause an asthma attack. Y'all are the Indians, on your trail of tears, We’re Andrew Jackson source of all your fears.
9Lives's picture

To be or not to be. I win hands down.
P.Geek's picture

I got one the rhyme off popular demand when he was like "So Stay Out Of Son Way Like Ya Drinking Blood" he said SON bt meant sun and vampires drinks blood so stay out of the sun like your a vampire which means stay out of Lupe's way cause he will kill you when you think about it thaat shit was clever he is a true blacksmith pioneer in the game word wiz really!!
Aradi's picture

Good one, Fish. As a fan of the show, I thought it was nice. Ehem.. "My Verbal’s able, and yours is Cane, like I flog that. Trying to take mine, but I tell you homie, that’s whack. I’m like flogging it, so I give it to you in a gift wrap. I whipping y’all, pull your pants up, cuz I can repeat that. And my cane’s sweet, admit it, it’s like sucrose. Like the brown, not the white, and I know that blows. But I’m able and I’m new like I’m the new dose Of fresh air, and vitamin D, so I don’t brown nose. Cuz I’m not Alf, so to you, my name is Sunshine Like I’m high and I’m bright, with my wack mind. And I’m hot, on my spot, with half a mind. To heat this scene, like I planned it, like I’m the mastermind..." I used Lupe themes that y'all can recognise. I'm sleepy right now, so I'll let y'all attempt to decipher it before I post an explanation.
Fish_2's picture

not really complicated...but I thought it was smart... "she's my big bang but can't be no Raj, her theory fits me perfect" Big Bang: meaning on my part, she's the start of a new world for me Big Bang Theory: reference to the TV show =| Raj: The Asian character in the show who can't talk to girls (unless drunk, I'm Asian myself, and don't drink so it was a way of saying just can't stand there being a mute) so...simple play of words...really...is this crap? =P
lupeforlife's picture

Nice
smoney22's picture

[and don't under mind this cause my lyrical guillotine will show you what neck is about] first of all it is saying don't underrate me or don't look over me and if you do i'l come at your neck lyrically which NECk is a reference to the line i stated earlier and don't under mind this because whats under your mind is your neck. so i'm saying that i'l show what happens if you look over me by killing you lyrically STE'VEN