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Rhyme inspired by Lupe - comment please

  • tduc's picture
    says: (24 Jan '10)

    Little Jenny walks down the street everyday,

    the concrete sidewalk is her project runaway,

    traded in her ideals for heels, books for looks, passion for fashion, a living contradiction,

    a six foot elf, 

    she's empty yet so full of herself; a critic, corrosive philosophy, acidic,

    with an hour glass body she is ahead of the curve,

    miss daisy is drunk driving better not swerve,

    she gives out candy, compliments she takes, 

    call her strawberry short, the makeup that she cakes,

    cremes, ointments, plastic surgery appointments,

    scorns at what she owns, 

    moms and dads chromosomes,

    dark hair gone,

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tduc's picture
on January 24, 2010

Little Jenny walks down the street everyday,

the concrete sidewalk is her project runaway,

traded in her ideals for heels, books for looks, passion for fashion, a living contradiction,

a six foot elf, 

she's empty yet so full of herself; a critic, corrosive philosophy, acidic,

with an hour glass body she is ahead of the curve,

miss daisy is drunk driving better not swerve,

she gives out candy, compliments she takes, 

call her strawberry short, the makeup that she cakes,

cremes, ointments, plastic surgery appointments,

scorns at what she owns, 

moms and dads chromosomes,

dark hair gone, platinum blonde, chest inflated: U.S. econ, 

shoots the mug, boots are uggs, retail the drug,

versace, dolce gabbana, so much clutter can't find Nirvana,

eye/I try to beholder/be hold her up,

while she drinks from half empty coffee cup,

ground beans can't bring her back to Earth, realness she doesn't thirst,

perhaps its the botox, drink up detox, lift the curse red sox, NO

she compromise, identity dies, and settle,

could have rise above like steam in a kettle, NO

Jenny finds a man in high demand with years of school,

saw his porsche, posh palace equipped with a pool,

she does not care about values or merit,

only attracted to his p's/peas and karats/carrots. 

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Thekid90's picture

Amazing, well written, I love your double play on words and meanings, Lupe does that a lot too, so you weren't kidding about him inspiring you. Hell you inspired me, keep it up tduc!!
AlectricGirl's picture

Not mad lmfao.
anagirldee's picture

I like this...i dont care what these other people have to say i'm digging this
AnonymousG's picture

Started good, then fizzled out from middle to end. Post more when its sure fire, not just hot.
Eagleztothegrave's picture

Damn... that good stuff
Swrap's picture

I really liked it man... its really good stuff. Very descriptive to where I could mentally picture her.
nIANja909's picture

lol... yeh Wicked. Regardless of your grammar we all know how intelligent an individual you are -_-
nIANja909's picture

I ain't mad, I just don't like seeing all these wack ass attempts at conscious rap. S*** is weak, unoriginal, uncreative, and ultimately, mediocre. You ain't enlightened nigga. And just mad cause I ain't feelin yah wack ass rhymes doesn't make me ignorant, the fact you really think you're mister wise old man with this crap makes you a jack ass. " Better be concious and awake then ignorant i guess. " lmao, you can't even spell the word correctly or construct a proper sentence dude, get over yourself. Now Get Money. And f*** off.
4ziATiC's picture

lol Droolin @TDUC not a contradiction @Ian why you so mad lol
AlectricGirl's picture

agreed.
tduc's picture

i apologize ..i thought this was a lupe blog. Better be concious and awake then ignorant i guess. Nianja i saw some of your other comments concerning other people. Nothing positive. i listen to lupe, kweli, mos def, de la soul, tribe
AlectricGirl's picture

lmfao no s***
Droolin's picture

relax. he wasn't trying make an impact on culture through an internet post
nIANja909's picture

This is the most generic "Conscious" crap I ever heard. Sounds like some s*** Lu or Wale would do, seriously. You do know, just like Generic materialistic and brag rap can be unoriginal, so can conscious rap.
Droolin's picture

that was awesome
AlectricGirl's picture

This is really good. I like it alot.
tduc's picture

contradiction - elves are usually not tall
nIANja909's picture

smh... gtfo.
COOL-DUDE's picture

loll its good
4ziATiC's picture

I like it but holy shit little jenny is six feet tall she must be intimidating as fuck man